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Shower with Nature by GamefreakDX Shower with Nature by GamefreakDX
So I decided to draw Green Storm once again. Seeing that she lives in a forest, I figured I'd draw her taking a shower with nature and whatever. I don't think she wants to be seen right now. Leave... or she might hurt you... for real.

For this one in particular, I'm enabling the Request Critiques because I'm quite proud of this drawing. I'm honestly a bit nervous though, but I'll suck it up and accept any sort of criticism.
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If i see a critique request I MUST.

First of all, You've achieved a good looking water effect over all. The splashing water is suitable for the water fall effect, her hair looks genuinely wet, and my favorite part is where the water distorts the image of her feet (or should I say hooves haha) in the water.

I also love the expression on Green Storm's face and the touch of blush.

My main criticism though, is the rocks and shrubbery in the background.
The rocks are acceptable, but don't have a very natural shape. Maybe this was just the style you were trying to capture, but even so, the shading is not as dynamic as it certainly could be.

The coloration on the bushes is too...unnatural. It doesn't look very healthy in general, and is a little to gray and blue. However the positioning is good overall, and the shimmering in the water.

Other than that I have no particular qualms with this drawing, I think it's rather good.
My advice is to practise shading and study some real life scenery beforehand.
:)
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BlueThunder123 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014
*Hiding as I watch* She'll never find me here..... ^^
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H0rnycorn Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Professional Filmographer
Y u blushing at me
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:icongamefreakdx:
GamefreakDX Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I... I think she's angry... I suggest leaving before she does something bad.
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:iconh0rnycorn:
H0rnycorn Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Professional Filmographer
Nope *stares*
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GamefreakDX Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
GS: *Leaf Shield and tosses it in your direction*
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H0rnycorn Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Professional Filmographer
*dodges*
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GamefreakDX Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*Gathers lots of leaves and shoot them*

You know, on an unrelated note... The hands in the 8 boss fight encounters in Street Fighter x Mega man... you could get health and ammo from them...? Argh! So much pain! *sobs*
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H0rnycorn Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Professional Filmographer
AH! TH IS WRONG WITH U!
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GamefreakDX Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Green Storm is a pretty harsh pony... and I'm stuck.
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Nafyo-Toons Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Cute scene 😊
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MeisterLi Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013
I think there is no content tag needed, no. :)

And it's really fun, you did a great job in capturing her personality here. :D
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GamefreakDX Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Heh, thanks.
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HonionB Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
it's not really mature content even if it's officially nudity, because then pretty much all animals would have to be mature content cuz they aren't wearing clothes ;P so no mature content tag needed imo.
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GamefreakDX Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well yeah, but it's like an anthro, so she'd have the same properties as a human... sorta. But thanks for saying so.
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HonionB Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Mehh, no need to fuss about these things if they don't obviously cross the line ^_^
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